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reconvened,
our mouths and hands
were begging
to be spry

talked about the heat while jazz
hung pumpkins in the sky

we crawled around and itched
a bit, and then i rubbed my eyes
fingerpads swirled
and reeked of some
purpose hypnotized

you
gyrated and slipped
i
tightened my grip
dice were thrown
branches grown
i put my color on your hip

my prayer hands
were filled by it
and bridged your eyes to mine

but our bones, a bit
had gone too thin
and rattled as we tired

oh, i was so
low abashed
you, sweetly,
kissed it high
and thereupon, dawn bowed fore us
as weight-of-wait went by

and so i draped
my own in yours

and so you draped
your own in mine

still, as stars must, so do we
fade out
and kiss
goodbye
©2007-2009 ~originill
:iconoriginill:

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row row row your boat

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:iconmr-lawg:
now, this is truly good writing. you exist in the minority of poets.

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Let's get pissed.
:iconoriginill:
thanks mr

--
my enemy said to me, "love your enemy."
and i obeyed him and loved myself. gibran
:iconoreyeon:
goodbye....
only a phisicality

--
Just go knowing
there will be to much
to sense than will
be understandable
and even though the
times & faces may change
second chances do occur
and reoccur.

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