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do you care if i,
clarify-
all of this spectacular.

would you mind if i,
blare of my-
absolute amazement.

vernacular-
afterwards,
inside lights-
glare it up.

remarkable parking,
in not so embarkable markings.

hungry?
i'm starving.
feed me some,
darling.

call me,
i'm falling.
from nothing,
to sorry.

empty,
and garnished.
running,
on tar, it's-
easy,
but hard, it's-
leaving-
me famished.

it's eating-
my heart, it's-
seeding-
it's bud's, and-
i'm inbetween, now-
having my fun.

i'm inbetween now, and-
inbetween done.

leave me be,
another moon-
and let me hear my calling.

cling to all,
precious lingo-
and try to fill the ceiling.

i think i've had,
quite enough-
of this shakey presentation.

so from now on,
you're my hollywood-
and i'm main attraction reciprocation.
©2003-2009 ~originill
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pretty cool rhythm...it's random and it works.

--
My religion consists of a humble admiration of the illimitable superior spirit who reveals himself in the slight details we are able to perceive with our frail and feeble mind. - Albert Einstein
I want to have wild monkey sex with this poem.

Is that bad?

--
<3 Kristen
remarkable parking,
in not so embarkable markings.

cling to all,
precious lingo-
and try to fill the ceiling.

goood lord. i'm breathless and baited, you've taken everything from my toes on up and made it defined.

random is far far far from precise.

--
i'd rather be the wisher than the penny in the well.
no, that's a perfectly normal reaction.

--
my enemy said to me, "love your enemy."
and i obeyed him and loved myself. gibran
I like this. I love it. It's... inspiring, I suppose would be how I see it.

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I love my Kristen.
:hump: Good deal.

--
<3 Kristen
wow, i love the rhythm and the way its broken up...youre damn good
this makes me think of something it implies to me..

great poem and words -

:heart: call me,
i'm falling.
from nothing,
to sorry. :heart:

--
x.Anouk
"empty,
and garnished.
running,
on tar, it's-
easy,
but hard, it's-
leaving-
me famished."

I actually pictured this in my mind. If that's possible.

-your lover from Jersey.

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